Are these Appalachian trailhead directions easy to follow?

A volunteer group is revising a short guide for day hikers visiting a popular Appalachian trail area. Map text can seem obvious to its authors, so they need an outdoorsperson to identify confusing landmarks and assumptions.

1Read the supplied directions and compare them with a trailhead you know from firsthand visits. Point out any landmark, parking instruction, or turn that a newcomer might misunderstand, and suggest clearer wording. Reply with numbered comments, up to six points, in 120–220 words. Do not provide sensitive information about restricted or fragile sites.

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